Thanks, as always, for sharing
Great character design, skin tones and detailing quirks.. very charismatic girls.. wonderful imagination. with wonderful technical skill to back it up... *v impressed. thanks for sharing!!
The blond one on the left is cute but the brunette honestly looks distorted. Her head is titled yet her cheekbones align horizontally, as if her face was melting. Her right eye, which is closer to us and should be a bit bigger, is actually smaller than her left. Her titled forehead makes her look like a neanderthal as well as the lack of volume at the back of her head.
No she wouldn't have fixed the structure. I don't think you understand. And yes, it is a style. The style is not purposely messing up anything, the style is she really couldn't care less. She's probably 10 times better than you anyway... And there isn't anything wrong with the face anyway. People, including you, keep trying to find things to pick at and critique. She didn't ask for a critique. And how do we even know you're a "fellow artist"? You don't even have any deviations. You don't always have to comment on what you think is incorrect, especially if you're wrong, which is true in this case. Anything else?... Nope?... Alright I think thats it!